Struggle : Haiku


 

stifled , silent cry,

ripples  echo  life song

an unsung struggle



{Say NO to Female Infanticide }


Originally I had written this as a Terset but changed it to make it into a Haiku . Here is the original one  .

stifled cry, silently screaming, ripples

echo a song of life, a death unsung

struggle for life cut short

*image courtsey Google*

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13 thoughts on “Struggle : Haiku

  1. WHOA!!
    Tiku..this is very moving, truly meaningful, absolutely thoughtful 3 lines..The most beautiful Haiku Ive read in ages!!
    Double thumbs up!

    thanks so much Vibhs .. The issue is so close to heart and need all the attention.

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  2. This is a beautiful and moving piece. I like your haiku and the terset is stunning and makes your thought complete. It is important to value life and you’ve captured this voice perfectly.

    Thanks White Girl . The issue is something we must all do something about. All lives are precious and unique and should be treasured

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  3. This is so very good Tiku!

    How do you conjure up beautiful thoughts and give it life in words?

    Thumbs up! You’re a master of creativity! 🙂


    Thanks Amity .. 🙂 just something that flows from within. Welcome to my blog .. keep visiting

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  5. u come up with such good imageries tiks..
    the dying ripple with a song of a life cut short!
    i have never tried haiku, dont know if i ever would, but this one was beautiful.. 🙂

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