Thunderstorm : A short verse

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Thunderstorm

windswept tree

torrents of rain

numb a sparrow watches

a little life suspended

between heaven and earth

Posted by tikulicious in My Poetry
Tagged: nature poem, offbeat, personal, poem, poetry, short verse, thunderstorm

7 thoughts on “Thunderstorm : A short verse”

Rajlakshmi says:

July 18, 2010 at 11:27 am

so well described… could feel the plight of sparrow … sometimes even we are caught in between moments similar to these 🙂
wonderful write…

Thanks Rajlashmi .. welcome to my blog 🙂 yes many such moments …

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Pallavi says:

July 18, 2010 at 2:07 pm

Awesome, Tiku!!! Very vivid, esp considering the brevity of the poem 🙂

Thanks Pal am glad you liked it. wanted to make it simple yet effective

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Tere Bin Laden synopsis plot says:

July 20, 2010 at 7:53 am

Hello Tiku,

First would like to congratulate you for your interview on Blogadda. It was tooo good.

Very thought provoking poem that too with minimal amount of words…STUPENDOUS!!!!!

Regards
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Thanks so much for reading and liking my Blogadda interview. I love it when readers reasond to my poetry in such a warm appreciation. Welcome to my blog and do keep reading.

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bina says:

July 20, 2010 at 10:13 pm

superb:)

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The Best Blogger says:

July 21, 2010 at 6:58 am

It’s Nice Post, keep posting and have a nice day… 06:58

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