For the last time
just before we parted
wrapped in silence
I sit across the table
dewy eyes, head bowed
mourning the love
he had slowly killed
averting his gaze
there at our favorite joint
I eat my dreams,
promises, hopes and desires
Words turn stranger
as a surge of memories
the bitter hot coffee
scalds my tongue
I struggle to cope
with the ending
so ruthlessly imposed on me
Everything was beautiful untill
the darkness of familiarity and ego
began to cast their shadows
Each time I looked at him
I saw myself
through him I began to understand life
He gave meaning to my identity
I was more of me when with him
than with myself
I found and lost myself in him
and never found again
and then
I lost him
Now
sitting under the cold, wet, bruised sky
I wonder
did I lose because he was he
or because
I was I ?
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beautiful !!!
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N I C E 🙂
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Very nice composition..kudos !!!!
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Tikuli,
You do have a talent, a way with words. Very beautifully expressed emotions that we usually are trying to supress.
May God Bless you and may you keep writing till the end of time.
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Beautiful words Tikuli….I could picturise the whole thing in my head.
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Thanks girls 🙂 . am glad my poetry is being appreciated. I wish my muse returns for some happy poems as well. do keep reading. I write what I feel , each poem is a part of my life.
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really touched with the expression of poetry.
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This poem is really good! I like the simplicity with which profound emotions are expressed here
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Beautiful :)simple words to portray profound emotions, kudos to you Tikuli 😀
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