Words hold me captive
unheard, unsaid words
silent cold words
with sharp, jagged edges
pointed words
smoldering hurting words
words dancing in dizzy circles
clogging words
imaginary, jumbled up words
words rising in my insomniac mind
dormant words
words throbbing, pulsating, vibrantly alive
unemotional, impersonal words
shallow words
hollow words
claustrophobic words
limp lifeless words
heart wrenching words
superfluous words
melting words
fiery words
frozen words
lucid words
caged words
dark words
assertive words
mocking laughing outlaws
dry, shriveled words
murky words
entangled words
unexpected words
pungent words
futile words
momentary words
suggestive words
words lurking in the dark
smoky, blurred, shady words
carefully crafted
chiseled words
distant words
persuasive words
incredibly dramatic words
evaporating words
flawless fluidity
passionate words
love laced noncommittal words
panting, exhausting orgasmic words
hurried words
flattering words
irrevocable words
fabricated words
discolored words
strained words
tainted words- crimson
words that flatter your ego
contradictory words
rearranged words
Word Trap- tormenting, deliberate, schemed
ghosts of words
that tap my shoulders and follow me in the dark
fragrant intoxicating words
i am Imprisoned, held captive by your words
whirlpool
twister
ECHOS
too many words …
-Tiku 22.11.2009
(Image courtesy internet)
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Awesome poems,
Its really heart touching π
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Words are they mere words
all encompassing ,all including words
frugal yet so expansive words
enriching verse the oh so rich words
Words words are they mere words
giving expression expressing words
thoghtfull ,thought expressing words
melting merging consolidating words
Tikuli you have a way with words
never cease bein fascinated with words
may your affair continue till eternity
with spoken words unspoken words
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lovely.does not need any more WORDS to be said.
I read it again and again.
Thanks Mom π I am happy you could find time to read and comment
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Wonderful Tiku. Loved the title too!
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Thank you everyone . Neeraj that was a lovely verse . I am honored. thank you
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Very well put indeed… Could be the script for the new Tata Indicom advertisement for their voice clarity series of advts… π
π thanks .. lol
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I spoke this powerful verse aloud
It could be heard above the crowd
No wonder its a tangy tuesday pick
The words rap, my emotions they twist!
Congrats Tikuli
I love your rhyme I love your rhyme
And happy that you could find some time
Thank you Ritu for this lovely comment .. treasure
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Read it myself. Read it to my daughter. Wanted to rhyme, and hence the delay in commenting π
A post like this makes one want to respond with more words, ‘carefully crafted words’, ‘fluid words’, even ‘dramatic’ words… π Will come back for that!!
Thank you so much IHM . being appreciated by you is heart warming , do come back .. love
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Loved Neeraj Sharma’s comment!! Rated it too.
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Wow !!
Awesome poems
Thank you . Keep visiting
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I simply loved this one!
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