Where have you come from O wandering moon
Is it from the land of sand dunes and oceans
Did you glide past his window
and see if he was longing for me ?
O luminous messenger of love
Do you have any message , some news
from my beloved?
Did he cup your face between his fingers
and whispered sweet nothings for me
Or was he indifferent and veiled his heart
and turn his face away
shutting you out
from his reclusive world?
silently I watch you move behind
the sad and lonesome leafless tree
trying to hide
your tear streaked face
Oh ! do not grieve for there shall be
a happy ending for you and me
in some other time and space
Go lonely wanderer
do not linger
shed your
ink black robe
and the gloomy Grey clouds
that hang around you
The sun awaits
in its Infinite Incandescence
illuminating the entire universe
and like me my friend
wait for the miracle to happen
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Tikuli, one of these days, I need to take some time and go through your archives. You are one of the best writers I’ve read in the blog world.
Solilo , you have touched my heart dear one. Coming from you this comment really humbles me. you are such a good writer yourself. Thank you so much .Do visit and leave your heart prints.
Hey Tiku… that was fantastic!!!
Cant really say …. which part of it i liked… it ws overall awesome..!!!
also the pic is just perfect!!!
the kind of mood u created with this piece has already disturbed me…
“was he longing for me..??? ”
hmmm… that line disturbed me!!!
keep pouring in with ur articles…and allow us to bathe in its silvery luster!!!
Hi Aditi thank you so much and welcome to my blog. I am glad you like my poems. Yes The moon at times disturbs because of the emotions attached to it. Keep visiting and do leave your comments.
Thats wonderfully written. Fantastic.
Thank you so much
As I read through piece, I felt like I reading the modern adaptation of “the last ride together” by Robert Browning.
The picture added to the mood the poem essentially created.
hoping to read more from you.
regards,
wanderer
http://wanderer-onestep.blogspot.com/
beautiful…simply beautiful. This was a very haunting poem.