I always loved this form of poetry .few words , depth and endless thoughts after that .It has been sometime since I tried my hand on it .Nabina’s blog prompted me to do it again .Today I thought, let’s sprinkle some magic dust across the blog post ..so let me try and create the beautiful world ,full of little bundles of unusual verses .
one
crows they fly in the sky
like pieces of black charred paper
drifting from a fire
two
The fog descends silently
over the trees ,parks,homes
watches and moves on
three
flowers rise to the sky
I lie on my back on grass
kiss,dance ,play of colours n light
Four
soft fluffy cotton clouds
endless blue sky,bubbling stream
sunlight on ripples,rainbow dreams
five
you left
forgot to take with you
the warmth of your hug
six
waves rise and fall
bitter sweet symphony of life
an endless romance
seven
the warm sand of beach
hugging the entire cool blue ocean length
from one end to the other
eight
your coat in the closet
a single long hair
memories of yesteryear’s
nine
fleeting glimpse in the crowd
your eyes haunt me
from day into the night
ten
A shooting star
a wish come true
great expectations
Eleven
fireflies dance
on earth and sky
in your eyes and mine
twelve
creases on used shirt
I try to iron them out
they stay like past grievances
thirteen
A dewdrop hanging from flower
my tear on your eyelash
slides silently on my lips
fourteen
morning mist
a young leaf unfolds
your arms give the warmth
fifteen
the bell finally rings
your silence on the phone
deafening











I read magic! Tiks doing her thing and she does it BEST
Sweet isn’t it, how you can weave all those random words together and make beautiful sense out of it. Loved it, simply loved it!
Wow…
You know you should try this Haiku thing more… you were best at it… I really enjoyed it readin….
will be doing poetry of all kinds often now been a life time sice i did it thanks Afaque
absolutely love ur hai ku’s.. tiks… very picturesque…. very evocative.. esp loved nos 6, 7 and 11… indeed ur darned good at this form… and it suits u best.. keep going, gal
Lovely and evocative. You have a mastery on imagery
thanks Ritzy ..you made it happen
Very creative… just loved it
Very creative… just loved it
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